
Day after day, she had looked out at the gloomy night sky. That night, she knew she had to take the plunge. Unconcerned about the outcome, she poured out her heart to him, the way one would when they knelt before the Lord. Suddenly, she saw sunlight streaming through the semi-transparent curtains. It had dawned.
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Yay! My first 55er!
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For the week’s prompt at 3WW: gloom, kneel, transparent
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Song on my mind: Kannil Dhaagam
Thanks for the song, Aps!
Fell in love with this song the instant I heard it on Aparna Shriram’s blog yesterday, and it has been on my mind ever since. I have listened to it n number of times since yesterday, and can’t seem to get enough of it. And, in a strange sort of way, it suits the story as well. What say you?
July 9, 2009 at 3:35 pm |
Nice one..felt very poignant..
Sathej
July 9, 2009 at 4:38 pm |
I like the symbolism!
July 9, 2009 at 4:46 pm |
Very nice post Priya! In the few words, there is superb transition from a feeling of cold to warm
And nice new template too!
July 9, 2009 at 4:52 pm |
Nicely done!
July 9, 2009 at 6:23 pm |
Very uplifting, and the photo is gorgeous!
July 9, 2009 at 7:12 pm |
Great stuff in such a small package.
July 9, 2009 at 11:14 pm |
Inspirationally positive. Nice work!
July 10, 2009 at 1:49 am |
the last line is powerful
July 10, 2009 at 12:41 pm |
@sathej
thanks a lot
@linda jacobs, tumblewords, thomG, fledgeling poet, andy
thanks for dropping by and for leaving a comment.. glad u liked it
@rambler
thank u!
@anupama
thank u so much. glad u liked it
btw, do u write fiction? haven’t read any on your blog.. curious..
July 11, 2009 at 5:09 am |
Leaps of faith take courage. Often rewarded.
July 11, 2009 at 2:30 pm |
Gr8 stuff PI.. You rock!
July 13, 2009 at 6:50 pm |
@pjd
well said. so true.
welcome here, and thanks for the comment!
@aps
thankings, girlie. you rock too!
July 25, 2009 at 11:18 pm |
hey such a short and cute piece…njoyed it….
by the way it wud be a pleasure…if u drop by my blog too.
@aritra
thanks, and welcome here! u dint leave the link to your blog…