Between me and life

 

I have made my move,

It’s your turn now, life,

Play,

Move the pieces as you want to;

Make your move,

Then

I will think,

Then

I will decide

What my next move should be,

For

Quit the game I will not…..

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16 Comments

Filed under Life, Motivation, My poems

16 responses to “Between me and life

  1. Brinda

    Thats what I call attitude… Kudos!

  2. Great, Priya….wonderful. That’s the way it should be….
    Best wishes,
    Sathej

  3. now this is the confidence I would love to see in everyone of us

  4. 🙂 checkmate being Death? 😉

    very deep verse..

  5. Full of confidence and strength. Great lines.

  6. priyaiyer

    @brinda

    danks! 🙂

    @sathej

    yep, that is exactly the way it is supposed to be. 🙂 thanks for the wishes. 🙂

    @rambler

    yep, me too. 🙂

    @priya

    thanks! 🙂 i was referring to the lemons that life throws at us in the form of problems. then, we have to make a move to convert them into opportunities. 🙂

    @sushil

    danke! 🙂 glad u liked them!

  7. And this post has provided me with the motivation I need so desperately during the exam season.
    Thank you.

  8. priyaiyer

    @stef

    hey! can i call u stef? somehow, it seems to suit you. 🙂

    am glad i could be of some use. 🙂

  9. Vinod R Iyer

    Keep making your moves. Even if you face a check-mate .. It’s just a game 🙂

  10. priyaiyer

    @vinod

    🙂 a checkmate in the game of life could be very troublesome. that’s why one needs to make the right moves. but, of course, that comes with practice.

  11. Lovely,lovely verse! very poignantly written.
    first time here. nice blog you have!

  12. priyaiyer

    @sementi

    hey, welcome here! thanks! 🙂

  13. Life, let us strike a chord
    Hold my hand
    Let me think
    Let me decide
    Hold my hand
    Let me read the opponent’s mind
    Let me predict his next move
    Hold my hand
    Let me build ‘our’ confidence levels
    Let me infuse optimism into ‘us’
    Hold my hand
    And just stay beside me
    Life, you and me – a team

  14. priyaiyer

    @niths

    🙂 great!!!!

  15. 😛 It does? Of course you can.

  16. priyaiyer

    @stef

    danke! yes, it does. 🙂

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