You

You ask me what keeps me going,

In the face of everything,

What makes me smile

In the face of pain,

What way does sweetness enter me

And gush over in my words,

My answer is simple

To all these questions of yours –

“You”

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16 Comments

Filed under Love, Musings, My poems

16 responses to “You

  1. Your poems are really nice….
    Especially where the theme revolves around the presence of love….
    This one too…. simple but powerful

    thanks, priti! glad you liked it… πŸ™‚

  2. Hi Priya

    I don’t like your poems.

    Hmmm…….Yes

    ur ………. and ………………..ur’s …yes …don’t like

    thanks Nice Good πŸ™‚

    raj
    rajdaksha@gmail.com

    hi, raj! thanks for your comment.. if you don’t like my poems, you are most welcome to skip reading them.. πŸ™‚

  3. Ahem ahem looks like someone is in Love πŸ˜‰

    oh, really? who, who, who? tell me, no? πŸ™‚

  4. Niyaz

    this is really nice , its happening in ma life ! u wrote it first anywayz thanks for bringing ur thoughts here πŸ™‚

    wow! really nice to hear that.. πŸ™‚

  5. Super Cuuttee.. πŸ™‚ Totally dripping with mush.. πŸ™‚

    danks! πŸ™‚

  6. s w a t

    Yes!! you! πŸ˜€

    what?!!!

  7. she calls her self Ms. Mush πŸ˜‰ we know her as Priya πŸ˜€

    oh, that silly girl? nah! can’t be…

  8. this was simple and lovely…liked this a lot

    thanks, rambler. glad you liked it. πŸ™‚

  9. wow πŸ™‚

    thanks a lot! πŸ™‚

  10. in your tag post you said “it was for the ms. mush IN you”. looks like the ms. mush IS you.

    is that so different? IN me means IS me, in a way.. πŸ™‚
    ms. mush is one of the thousands of personalities living in me.. πŸ˜›

  11. Nithya Sivashankar

    I agree with Sharan ! You ARE Ms. Mush. It might be one of your alter egos. But it dominates πŸ™‚

    on that, i think you are bang on!!! πŸ™‚

  12. Simple and lovely!

    welcome here, prajeesh! thanks a lot! πŸ™‚

  13. Veens

    oo! You know I love this kind of poems !!

    πŸ™‚

    thanks, veens! πŸ™‚

  14. very Nice… Eppadi ippadi ellam πŸ™‚

    thanks, vg! long time, no see?
    epdi enna ellam?

  15. Hey, the poem is really good, its like that Nokia – Slim yet Powerful; In this case its “Small yet Powerful” πŸ™‚

    thanks, kumar.. and welcome here πŸ™‚

  16. s w a t

    my previous comment was in response to your answer for #3

    oh, ok ok πŸ™‚

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