‘Our’ fate

They say fate is in the lines of the hands;

As I gaze at the deep brown lines

On my palms

I can’t help but offer

My prayers and endless thankings

To the unknown one

That placed your hands

In mine.

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Filed under Love, My poems

8 responses to “‘Our’ fate

  1. Lot of poetry these days….and very good ones. Great going Priya.

    thanks, sushil! glad you liked them 🙂

  2. What can I say? Poignant. Period.

    danke! 🙂

  3. lovely

    thanks, rambler! 🙂

  4. Niyaz

    awesome !!!

    thanks, niyaz! 🙂

  5. Beautiful.. 🙂

    thanks, aps! 🙂

    Ahem ahem.. BTW are we supposed to read in between lines?? 😉

    evlav paer pa ippidi kelambirkeenga? 🙂

  6. hummm nice one. plz plz spill the beans 😀

    i have. 🙂 check out the latest post. 🙂

  7. wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!

    this is FANTABULOUS!

    u knw hw i love .. lov poetry

    u r a DIVA!


    thanks, veens! no diva and all.. come on.. 🙂

  8. you choose your fate
    by the things you do
    If you are good
    your fate will be too

    i partly agree with this! 🙂

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