Us

As we stand there drenched in the rain

Eating corn on the cob,

Watching the world go by,

As we watch with tender love

At the infant bouncing in his mother’s arms,

Gurgling and giggling,

As we watch, with awe,

The tiny firefly in your hand,

Lit up as bright as a bulb,

As we watch the plants swaying

In the gentle breeze,

Sipping hot cups of tea in our balcony,

As we sit next to each other

And laugh at the antics of young girls and boys

Feeling we are past that generation,

As we come back

To each other,

After every stupid fight,

As we look askance at each other,

Over a plate of pani puri,

And gesture that it’s eatable,

As we pore over

Gifts for a relative,

To find out something we both like,

As we look over handicrafts,

Home appliances and furniture

To decorate our little nest,

As we, without being told,

Join teams,

To tease the hell out of that little cousin,

As we decide on

The menu for the day,

Later, as I cook and you do the dishes,

As we smile at each other

When people bless us,

And build dreams for the future,

As we talk out

The horrid ups and downs of the day

At work and in life,

As we chill out on a Sunday afternoon

And discuss, for the umpteenth time,

The experiences we have enjoyed,

As we stand before God,

Together, hands clasped in a prayer,

Wishing for the same togetherness always,

As we drive back together

Home from work,

Tired, dreading the next hectic day,

As we recount the happenings of the day

Exhausted, lying in bed,

Suddenly finding that the other has drifted off,

As we shop at the supermarket,

And fill in the refrigerator till it bulges,

Preparing for your indefinite work tours,

I feel I have the whole of the world in the palm of my hand.

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For the week’s prompt over at One Single Impression: Romance

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Song on my mind:

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18 Comments

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18 responses to “Us

  1. Nicely written..shall comment in detail shortly πŸ™‚

    Sathej

  2. Precious tiny pleasures. Nicely done. Could almost relate. πŸ™‚

  3. ahem! πŸ™‚
    beautiful πŸ™‚
    And thats one my fav song. Wish todays Hindi music made more “sense”.

  4. I just realised that most of the Tere Bina songs are wonderful.

    Tere Bina from Ghar
    Tere Bina from Aandhi
    Tere Bina from Guru

    πŸ™‚

  5. you do have whole world in your palm.. don’t open it.. it can fly..

    nicely constructed words.. and awesome song.

  6. Wow. Loved it. And the best part, could almost visualise it all! πŸ˜€ Very apt!

  7. s w a t

    Do you want me to copy-paste what I already told you? πŸ˜›

    Nice header πŸ˜€

  8. priyaiyer

    @sathej

    thanks! glad u liked it! πŸ™‚

    @blue mist

    thanks! it is these little things that make life worth living, isnt it?

    @praveen

    thanks! yes, all three songs are amazing! πŸ™‚

  9. priyaiyer

    @yuva

    thank u! i will take care to protect it as far as i can πŸ™‚

    @divya

    thank u so much girl! πŸ™‚

    @swat

    he he.. thanks for the nice words, girl! πŸ™‚

  10. Aww!
    Loads of mush and such sweet mush too!
    Hope your prayers are answered and the two of you have loads to giggle, laugh and love about.

  11. //Sipping hot cups of tea in our balcony//

    //As we smile at each other

    When people bless us//

    //As we chill out on a Sunday afternoon//

    //Together, hands clasped in a prayer//

    These lines were just so touching to me. Powerfully emotional. Just wanted to comment on this earlier πŸ™‚

    Sunday afternoons – the charm is something different! Hands clasped in prayer – somehow reminds me of an Airtel Ad – Express Yourself, where the caption in one frame says ‘Sometimes, we speak nothing’ or something to that effect..

    Nice one..

    Sathej

  12. priyaiyer

    @chennairamblings

    thanks so much! i pray for the same too! πŸ™‚

    @sathej

    thanks.. πŸ™‚

  13. Kavitha

    Hi Priya!!
    Beautifully written :))

  14. priyaiyer

    @kavitha

    hey! long time? how have you been?
    thanks! glad u liked it. πŸ™‚

  15. Creepy…I was actually listening to Tere Bina Jiya Jaayena when I was reading this one πŸ™‚ and when I scroll down, you have posted the same video πŸ˜€ was reminded of Aapki Aankhon Mein Kuch from the same movie.

  16. priyaiyer

    @vivek

    he he.. thats real creepy πŸ™‚

    yes, aapki aankhon mein is a lovely song as well.. one of my favourites.. πŸ™‚

  17. Hey Priya!

    I can only say one thing and I hope you know it is the biggest compliment I can pay to this beautiful piece…it makes me want to get married more than ever πŸ™‚

    Take care…

  18. priyaiyer

    @anupama

    thank you so much πŸ™‚ god bless.. yes, being married is a BEAUTIFUL experience.. definitely one worth having, with its ups and downs. πŸ™‚

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