Trapped bliss

Beautiful, magical notes

Notes of bliss

From aeons ago

Lie trapped,

Cobwebbed by time

Are they strong enough

To unleash themselves?


This is for the week’s prompt over at Magpie Tales. I’m doing a prompt after a really long time – in fact, writing a poem after ages. So, please to pardon me if I’ve gotten rusty. This is an attempt to start writing properly again. πŸ™‚



Filed under My poems, Prompts

18 responses to “Trapped bliss

  1. Pardon? U R SOOOO GOOD!

  2. Wonderful magpie! You are not in the least bit rusty! Maybe I will also try. . . .

  3. nice to see ur poems after a long time.keep writing more

  4. Veens

    However cobwebbed,
    Notes from the heart will sing your song
    to the love of your heart
    if only you allow them.

    See… if you just restart writing, the rust will go off in no time. You are doing good!

  5. this twice and am still tending to ask myself ..will they…are they..ready to unleash

    • priyaiyer


      Hey! Good to see you here after a long time!
      Thank you! Both of us used to be so enthusiastic about writing for the prompts earlier, remember! Miss those days of creativity! 😦 Wish they come back soon!

  6. This is a wonderful piece. Aptly describes the power music has to unleash locked emotions. A very happy new year to you! Thanks so much for the enquire, I was very touched by the comment you left on m blog. I have been a little unwell, that and work made it impossible to blog the last month. Hope to put up a post tomorrow. Look for it! And Happy Pongal! πŸ™‚

    • priyaiyer


      Thank you!! Glad you liked it!!
      Thanks for the wishes! Hope you had a lovely Pongal too!
      Good to see you up and about on your blog. πŸ™‚

  7. Rusty!
    Not at all!
    All of us come to this stage where we believe ourselves rusty and the only way out is to write more and write often, alas, some of us are still fighting writer’s block for the last two years. 😦

  8. Beautiful lines Priya!!

  9. I can’t believe that my akka has not blogged over the past 10 days. Are u all right?

    • priyaiyer


      Hey! Thanks for the enquiry!
      Yes, I am fine. Was unable to blog as I was on a holiday and did not have access to the Internet. Hope to come back soon!
      Thanks again!

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