Let’s go to the carnival

Come let us hold hands

As we run on the wet roads

Dark and slippery

They don’t scare me now

Rather, seem inviting

The twists and turns

 

Come let us hold hands

As we run on the wet roads

Seeing the sights

Smelling the smells

On the way

 

Come let us hold hands

As we run on the wet roads

Let’s find our way

Let’s go together to the carnival

They say there is at the far end

For this week’s Magpie

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18 Comments

Filed under Life, Love, My poems, Prompts

18 responses to “Let’s go to the carnival

  1. Priya, this is wonderful! Love enboldens us. I wasn’t expecting a Magpie. 🙂

  2. Anu

    That’s beautifully written poem!
    PS: Am still catching up with my umpteen unread posts!

  3. Nicely done!
    Haven’t had too much time to go through all blogs I usually do, glad I decided on yours first!
    And auspicious start! 🙂

  4. Beautifully written. You have brought out the emotions really well through your write-up. Keep coming such posts. Really enjoyed my stay here 🙂

    Hope you enjoy reading my post too – To hold you in my arms, to promise you my love!

  5. let’s run,
    cool word flow and lovely emotions.
    cheers.
    🙂

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